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MTW: Weaving Argument and Description Together

Mentor Texts: I used excerpts from the following reviews: “With Poetic Intensity, Kevin Powers Tackles the Terror of War” (book of poetry) “Modern Family: A Hard Jay’s Night” (television episode) “Pharrell Williams: Just Exhilaratingly Happy” (album) Note: Read Rebekah’s post about how she uses this mentor text to teach figurative language “Titanfall Supplants Its Ancestors […]

Mentor Text Wednesday: Moving Past Summary in Film Analysis

Mentor Text:  “Captain America on the Potomac” by Linda Holmes for NPR. April 1, 2014. Skill Taught: Moving past summary in film analysis Background: My English 9s are working on an essay  on the theme of a Pixar short film of their choosing as an entry point into the world of analytical, academic writing. The films are […]

Mentor Text Wednesday: Restaurant Review PLUS Interview with Writer

Mentor Text: Wells, Pete. “Fred and Barney Would Feel Right at Home.” The New York Times. The New York Times Co. 28 Jan. 2014. Web. 7 April 2014. Author Information: “At the Critics’ Table.” The New York Times. The New York Times Co. 3 Sept. 2013. Web. 7 April 2014. Background: Driving to work this week, […]

Mentor Text Wednesday: Teaching Students to Write Meaningful Comparisons & Contrasts

Mentor Text:  Bowman, Donna. “On the Eve of Its Finale, It’s Time to Compare How I Met Your Mother to Itself.” The A.V. Club. 30 March 2014. Skill:  Teaching Students to Write Meaningful Comparions & Contrasts Background:  My IB seniors are barreling toward their Big Exam. Truthfully, they have done so much heavy mental lifting in this course […]

Mentor Text Wednesday: Inspiring Mentor Texts

Mentor Texts: “Repetition” by Phil Kaye “In Childhood” by Sarah A. Chavez Skill: Seeking inspiration from outside sources Most discussions about writer’s workshop usually center around two components: mini lessons and conferring. They are the favorite children of workshop. But lately Rebekah and I have been turning our attention to mentor texts. When students leave […]

Moving Students from Idea to Draft: a Sticky-Note Structure

Structure seems to be something young writers innately sense … or don’t.  Those who don’t tend to have explosive bursts of thought, leaving word shrapnel all over the paper. To try to combat this, one of my first mini-lessons of the year is on brainstorming — hoping that if students write their ideas down somewhere, […]