Mentor Text Wednesday: “so much depends…”

Mentor Text: “The Red Wheelbarrow” by William Carlos Williams

Writing Techniques:

  • Poetic form
  • Focusing on main idea
  • Brevity

Background: Last year, I made a conscious decision to dedicate April’s Mentor Text Wednesday posts to poetry, in honor of it being National Poetry Month. I plan to continue that tradition.

This week, I want to share my thoughts about this simple, and beautiful poem. I love it, but I also love how it engages, perplexes and challenges students.

As I shared last year, my Grade 10 students create OUPAs, or Original Unique Poetry Anthologies. We recycle old books, giving them interesting new titles, and covers. Then, throughout the course, we regularly add new poems to them, using a poetic form, or pieces of poetry as a mentor text. It’s a pretty engaging activity, and a tradition I love having in my classroom.

red_wheelbarrow1

My favorite result in an interesting image search… via ENG106

One of the first poems I used as a mentor text this year was this William Carlos Williams classic. (If you click through to last year’s post about the OUPA, you’ll see that I reference this poem there too. I’m going deeper on it this year!) I have long had a soft spot for this poem, and the way that students react to it. It’s a great way to deconstruct preconceived notions of what poetry is, and it’s a simple piece for them to model original pieces upon. There is a lot of great discussion.

 

However, the more I think about this little poem, the more applications that I see for it.

How we might use this text:

Poetic Form – Even at Grade 10, students still have a pretty fixed idea of what poetry looks like. they expect stanzas and rhyme. They expect things that are a bit longer. I love their reaction to “The Red Wheelbarrow.” “That’s not a poem! It’s a sentence arranged like a poem!” A fair argument, but it allows us to have a conversation about what makes a poem a poem. We discuss what some poems do, and the conventions we’ve come to expect, but more importantly, we get to discuss how we, as poets, can mess with those conventions.

Specifically, one of the poetic lessons that this tiny, yet vital, poem allows us to teach budding poets is the idea that a line of poetry does not necessarily equal a sentence. We can use poetic license to divide sentences into lines, even stanzas for various effects. We discuss the impact of a line that simply reads “so much depends” and how it emphasizes the importance of what follows. We see that Williams divides the stanzas of the poem in such a way as to highlight each individual item – the wheelbarrow, the rain, the chickens. It makes us ponder the importance of each of these things.

I love, using the random topics generated by the OUPA, having them write pieces inspired by this poem. Even though many wind up simply aping the choices that Williams made in the original, they need to think about the form as they write. In doing so, I hope that they take the lessons in poetic form with them into their own poetry.

Focusing on main idea – As I was deciding which poetic mentor text I would focus on this week, I found myself reflecting upon some of the conversations I’ve had about this poem over the years. I specifically thought about some of the coaching I was doing as we wrote “Red Wheelbarrow” inspired poems this year. I found myself repeating, “What is it that matters in the topic of the anthology you’re writing for? What does “so much” depend upon?”

It also struck me that the work that I was doing in a couple of my other current classes actually had me asking variation of that same question. “What matters? What is it really about? What’s a main idea here?”Isn’t “so much depends/upon” a delightful stem from which to work in answering those questions? Consider, also, that the poem, as a mentor text, actually encourages them towards a stronger response in that they don’t just identify the one thing that matters, but prompts them to expand upon that. It’s not just that “so much depends/upon” the wheelbarrow, but the rainwater glaze and chickens add to its import.

I’ve been using poetry as a literary response tool, via Golden Shovel poetry and Illustrated Blackout poetry. Students use those forms to respond to, and make commentary upon texts that they’ve read. It’s been quite successful, but I’ve had a handful of students asking for another poetic response option. I think “The Red Wheelbarrow” has great potential for this. We’ve recently finished Of Mice and Men, and I can’t help but wonder what they’d say “so much depends/upon” in that book. What a delightful, and brief, way to gauge their grasp of the book.

This could also work as a potential first draft for a thesis, or other element in an introduction. In using the form, our writers would identify what is of great importance that they’re writing about, as well as linking a couple of supporting details.

Brevity – I like to highlight, from time to time, mentor texts that allow us to write “smaller” because I like how these kinds of constraints “encourage” writers to focus their message. One of the reasons that as a writer, I enjoy Twitter, is that the character limit forces me to focus my message, to consider my word choices, and the impact of the words I choose.

This poem does a similar things. The whole thing is a sentence, yes, but it’s a sentence that we’ve been picking apart in English classes for years. If we adhere to notion that poetry is communicating our grandest ideas in the fewest words possible, this poem is a strong defending argument. In what is essentially a single sentence, a poet needs to communicate their idea.

This poem continues to be a gift in my classroom. It brings forth a joyful chaos that serves as a catalyst for learning and writing. As I share it in my classroom, I find that my use for it grows and develops. It inspires critical thinking about form and poetic conventions, and allows my writers a “safe” model to work with as they look to grow as writers.

How else can I evolve my use of this poem as a mentor text? Do you have a go-to poem, one that you’re excited to teach, to use to inspire your writers?

Leave a comment below or find me on Twitter @doodlinmunkyboy

–Jay

Advertisements

3 thoughts on “Mentor Text Wednesday: “so much depends…”

  1. Jay, thank you for this. I have struggled with (pondered on, been challenged by, confused by) with The Red Wheelbarrow most of my adult life (even though I’m an English teacher who has won awards). You are so right–the poem is a thesis statement, and you can use it as a mentor text to create responses to literature.

    so much depends
    upon

    George and
    Lenny

    finding
    work

    and not screwing
    up.

    ———
    so much depends
    upon

    Hamlet, Prince of
    Denmark

    learning the
    truth

    before he is
    killed.

    I found that I went through a couple of drafts for these examples because I tend to put the “so much” in one of the lines. I realized that I have to keep the “so much” unsaid to conform to the structure of the poem.

    The “so much” is thematic. Getting a place of their own. Setting things right. The “so much” translates into the “so what?” that we struggle to evoke from students with their writing and especially with thesis statements.

    So now I’m going to play with switching out the themes–the “so much”–in my little examples and see what happens. The characters and the modifying phrases will surely change. But starting out this way absolutely has you focus on relevant details.

    • Here’s one more:

      so much depends
      upon

      Hamlet, Prince of
      Denmark

      hiding his own
      sanity

      around other
      characters

      “so much” = knowing what is real

      • I’m glad it helped. I’ve always loved the poem personally, but using it with students, I’ve come to appreciate it so much more. I love what you’ve posted here, and we could use it, as well, to have them explore characters’ POV, write a ‘Red Wheelbarrow’ in someone’s voice.

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s